Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The demand

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fossil fuels

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increased significantly in

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recent years, mainly due to industrialization.

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, it is essential to find these natural

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in inaccessible areas for

survival

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of mankind. In my opinion, the merits weigh greater than the demerits as per the current scenario.

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with, Exploring fossil fuels in remote locations can improve the scarcity of these

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with

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of these

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can help other

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who lack these

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through export trade.

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exploration

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can help to cover the global demand for these

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,

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activity will ease the

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oil rich

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countries

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countries

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can help poorer

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which lack

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and gas deposits

instead

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of supplying majority their resource to China and USA.

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, the soaring high

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of

oil

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and gas can be reduced globally. Since

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natural

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are non-renewable and the demand based on the current situation is very high, the

prices

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will rise up eventually, beyond control in many

countries

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, In a developing country like India, the

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have already increased to hundred rupees per litre. It has been predicted that these

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may

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increase

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up to

fifty per cent in the

next

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five years.

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, it essential for

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like India to find a new source within their country. Despite the pros, there are some major cons in

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exploration

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. Drilling activity which is the major

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for obtaining these

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will affect the ecosystem irreversibly. Water pollution due to

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spillage in the oceans and rivers is

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another major concern.

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accident in Nigeria

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led to

oil

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spillage in the ocean.

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oil

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contamination saw many

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in the country struggle to make their daily income. To conclude,

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there are some great disadvantages in the

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of exploring new areas to find

oil

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and gas, the only possible solution would be to find an alternate resource. Till

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I believe, find new sources in untouched locations will benefit to meet the requirements and control the

prices

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