The two maps illustrate how Tempton, a seaside resort, developed in a period of thirteen years, from 2000 to 2013.

The two maps illustrate how Tempton, a seaside resort, developed in a period of thirteen years, from 2000 to 2013.

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village witnessed several changes, the most noticeable concern

the

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replacement of many

trees

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and

houses

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with blocks of flats and the

added

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of facilities and infrastructures. In 2000 there were many

houses

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in a residential area, in the

south-west

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southwest

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of the

river

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, just in front of the sea,

numerous

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with numerous

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trees

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and only one block of flats.

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at the

north-west

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northwest

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of the

river

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and around the lake

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located a few

houses

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and

trees

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.

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the

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thirteen years later, along the

seariver

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server

sea river

in the south-west,

trees

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and small buildings were replaced by two other towering

bloks

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blocks

of flats, and on the opposite side of a small new road, it was built a supermarket.

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, in the

north-west

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northwest

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of the

river

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, some

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were cut down and

houses

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removed for the construction of several buildings.

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in

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on

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the

est

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east

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side of the

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river

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there were some important changes,

in particular

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, in 2000 there were the school and hospital buildings,

trees

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everywhere and a railway station.

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in 2013 every tree was chopped down, was added the airport in the south, just

next

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to the

river

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, a factory in the north, rather,

hospital

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a hospital

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and school

was remained

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there.

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Furthermore

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the railway was extended, running along the coast,

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a ferry service was placed in the south-east of the resort.