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The given graph describes the
rate
 of jobless
people
 around Australia for every 3 months of 2012 in percentage in both cities and countryside. Clearly, there are more unemployed
people
 in a rural area than that in urban.
However
, the
rate
 of
unemployment
 in the countryside reduces by the end of 2012. Noticeably, for the rural
people
, the lack of a job is highest in the beginning of 2012 with 7% of rural citizens getting jobs.
Nevertheless
, the
rate
 drops to one in twenty
people
 jobless in the final quarter of 2012.
Besides
, the graph for
unemployment
 in rural area fluctuates throughout the year 2012. In terms of urban employment, it is quite the opposite of rural
areas
. At
first
, the
unemployment
 is merely above 2%,
on the contrary
, the
rate
 increases by 2% more unlike in rural
areas
. By the end of 2012, both rural and urban
areas
 have a pretty similar
rate
 of
unemployment
. In a nutshell, more percentage of
people
 in
the
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rural area need a job, despite being that the
rate
 of
unemployment
 in cities is
also
 going up. Regardless, there is more
unemployment
 in rural
areas
 for the whole year of 2012.
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