Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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globalisation, manufacturing
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time which became a debatable topic in our society. While others
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to
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believe
that low
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i
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would like to explain my point of view and focus on both pros and cons of
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topic.
Firstly
, some individuals like to purchase branded
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and it became their passion
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. So, by using the particular
things
daily they become obsessed
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it
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. If suddenly the product damage and they cannot use it as they
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buy
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it costly which leads them to irritate and make life miserable.
For example
, One of
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friend
freind
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use
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the expensive branded belt for his work
everyday
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to look professional attire.
Hence
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torn
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due to usage for few months due to
this
my friend stop using to
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itwear
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. In his view companies are not makings
goods
in a quality manner as they are not living
long
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life. On
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other
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side of view, some people perspectives regarding
goods
which are
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cheap
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a cheap
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price
are too good for use and
also
long living with affordable
price
.
Moreover
, they think that
cheapest
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the cheapest
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price
does not make
concern
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a concern
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if they left us in between by damaging or stop working as they gave a reasonable
price
for that.
For instance
, I brought my
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handbag
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hand bag
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handbag
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for a cheap
price
and used
quite
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it quite
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often after
few
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a few
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days bag was damaged and it doesn't bother me as
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brought it for
low
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price
and used it well. In conclusion,
i
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want to state that low
price
goods
are too good rather than buying branded costliest
things
.
Things
which
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are cheaper does not mean that they are bad
infact
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in fact
they
dont
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don't
have
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a
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logo name
thats
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that
that's
the variation and
i
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dont
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don't
care about that status of wearing branded
things
.
Furthermore
, cheap
things
are
best
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the best
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things
and long
surving
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serving
surviving
surfing
for us.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • disposable goods
  • economic benefits
  • frequent replacements
  • technological adaptation
  • manufacturing affordability
  • environmental responsibility
  • longevity
  • minimize costs
  • wider society
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