Some people believe that companies should manufacture products that last for a long time. Others feel that the emphasis should be placed on producing goods that are cheap. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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today's
today
todays
globalisation, manufacturing Change to a genitive case
today's
goods
does not survive for long
time which became a debatable topic in our society. While others Change the article
a long
tends
to Change the verb form
tend
beleive
that low Correct your spelling
believe
price
goods
must give a preference. In this
essay
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,essay
i
would like to explain my point of view and focus on both pros and cons of Change the capitalization
I
this
topic.
Firstly
, some individuals like to purchase branded things
and it became their passion now a days
. So, by using the particular Correct the word
nowadays
things
daily they become obsessed to
Change preposition
with
it
. If suddenly the product damage and they cannot use it as they Correct pronoun usage
them
Correct your spelling
buy
buyed
it costly which leads them to irritate and make life miserable. Correct your spelling
bought
For example
, One of Correct your spelling
friend
freind
Correct pronoun usage
my freind
use
the expensive branded belt for his work Change the verb form
uses
everyday
to look professional attire. Replace the word
every day
Hence
, one day belt was teared
due to usage for few months due to Correct your spelling
torn
this
my friend stop using to wear
. In his view companies are not makings Correct pronoun usage
itwear
goods
in a quality manner as they are not living long
life.
On Add an article
a long
Correct article usage
the other
other
side of view, some people perspectives regarding Change the wording
another
goods
which are in
Change preposition
at
cheap
Correct article usage
a cheap
price
are too good for use and also
long living with affordable price
. Moreover
, they think that cheapest
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the cheapest
price
does not make concern
if they left us in between by damaging or stop working as they gave a reasonable Correct article usage
a concern
price
for that. For instance
, I brought my Correct your spelling
handbag
hand bag
for a cheap Correct your spelling
handbag
price
and used quite
often after Correct pronoun usage
it quite
few
days bag was damaged and it doesn't bother me as Correct article usage
a few
i
brought it for Change the capitalization
I
low
Add an article
a low
price
and used it well.
In conclusion, i
want to state that low Change the capitalization
I
price
goods
are too good rather than buying branded costliest things
. Things
which
are cheaper does not mean that they are bad Correct pronoun usage
that
infact
they Correct your spelling
in fact
dont
haveCorrect your spelling
don't
Correct article usage
a
thats
the variation and Correct your spelling
that
that's
i
Change the capitalization
I
dont
care about that status of wearing branded Correct your spelling
don't
things
. Furthermore
, cheap things
are best
Correct article usage
the best
things
and long surving
for us.Correct your spelling
serving
surviving
surfing
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