Many doctors say that people in today's world do not do enough physical exercise. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions are there to this problem?

The issue of body movement has become a highly considerable topic in
modern
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era. Though human
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unwilling to do
this
, it has noticeable benefits in our life. In
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eassy
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easy
, I will discuss why we are not habituated to do
such
activities which are essential for health and recommended by physicians. And what can be done to solve the problem
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To begin
with, doing some extra bodily activities is important for us.But
in
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this
time,
people
firmly disagree with
this
fact. There is a number of reasons behind
this
disagreement. Perhaps, the
first
cause of avoiding physical
exercise
is the modern lifestyle. The way we are living, we totally depend on technology.
For instance
, nowadays,
people
do not need to walk. Even a short distance can be passed by
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the vehicle
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.
Besides
this
, lots of difficult works are done by machinery tools. And so human have been workshy which are the main cause why folks do not do any kind of physical workout.
The another
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reason is insufficient free places. Having a tiny space for walking or warming up, humans can not be able to make proper
exercise
.
For example
, in many towns or cities,
people
do not have any park or field to do
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movement. Every problem has a solution too. Some initiatives have to be taken to encourage ourselves for doing
exercise
.
Firstly
, awareness among
community
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should be taken. Young
people
should form
club
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a club
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or gym
center
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to do
workout
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the workout
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.
Secondly
, the consumption of machinery things
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to be reduced.
Such
as, for
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distance
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people
should not use transport.
Finally
,
plethora
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of parks or playground
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needed to be formed up all over the country. To sum up, though there are lots of reason for being unhabituated to do
exercise
, we should focus on the solutions. If human
are
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able to lead a healthy life with proper
exercise
, it will be better for the nation too.
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