Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is undeniable that most of the countries have been suffered
the
climate changes or some environmental Correct article usage
apply
Problems
in todays. While some people
think that biodiversity which
can Correct pronoun usage
apply
causes
the main environmental Change the verb form
cause
problems
, others accept that there are some other natural disasters
which
can cause Correct pronoun usage
that
environment
Replace the word
environmental
problems
. In this
essay, I will discuss the
both views in detail and I would argue Remove the article
apply
that
depletion of plants and living things.
Correct determiner usage
the
Firstly
, there is no country who
doesn’t suffer from natural Correct pronoun usage
that
disasters
in the world
. For example
, Japan, one of the countries in world
, locating Add an article
the world
on
Earthquake zone frequently suffers the earthquake almost in all places of Change preposition
in
county
. Add an article
the county
Moreover
, in
some countries are unable to avoid over raining or flood or sandstorms. Recently, Change preposition
apply
china
has faced with Change the capitalization
China
the
sandstorm for two days and getting air pollution is in Correct article usage
a
red
zone. Add an article
the red
People
are aware the natural disasters
as this
cause the problem for our environment
. Normally, people
are getting know
from news about the environmental Replace the word
knowledge
problems
even though it did not happen in local
country.
Add an article
the local
Secondly
, global warming is the main problem of overusing the species in the world
. Nowadays, people
are accepting that fishing and, wearing the
clothes and Jewry which made of animals, are for their fun and exercise. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, habitats have been destroyed for industrial
firm and for housing plans have caused Add an article
the industrial
an industrial
the
one Correct article usage
apply
the
Change preposition
of the
problems
for environment
. Not surprisingly, there will be carbon dioxide in our Add an article
the environment
environment
as most of
Change preposition
apply
flora
are depleting and there is not enough time for species to rebirth again and plants to alive. There more we used flora and furan, the less we get the green Add an article
the flora
environment
.
To conclude, environment
is the key for all of us to Add an article
the environment
alive
in Correct your spelling
live
this
world
. Therefore
, there should be retain
the Change the verb form
retain
environment
not to damage from natural disasters
and I highly people
want to emphasise to maintain species and animals as this
is main
Change the article
the main
case
of environmental Correct your spelling
cause
problems
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite