Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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against gender discrimination. There are many males as compared to the

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who have their own role in

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and armed forces. Many people think that

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must be given equal priority as males in

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fields. In my opinion,

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should be given enough chances in

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national security , but there is no need for equal participation.

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, in each and every society the people have huge dreams that they want equal facilities and opportunities.

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, the

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we can see that

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are well educated and are capable of doing the jobs in which high risk and pressure are involved.

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, Nirmala Seethaream, the current finance

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of India was

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defence

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of India from September 2017 to 2019. Due to the demise of Arun Jaitley former Finance

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she got an opportunity as finance

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. Her role as the defence

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indicates that

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have an ability to perform jobs that are considered for

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.

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, there are many positions involved in army and

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divisions, where the employees need to work inside the office working as an analyst, which can be occupied by the

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.

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, working as a

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or army personal

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requires a high physical strength which makes it more suitable for the

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to do the job, where it is clear that

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have more strength than

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. The security forces of a country must go through tough situations like crawling through rough terrains, carrying heavy ammunition.

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, take the case of the

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force who daily encounter rigorous fights on the street with heavy arms and safety equipment,

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, as per some female analyst, if the government sets an equal opportunity for

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in

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fields, it will reduce the efficiency of the force, To conclude, employment in the

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or army requires high physical power. In my ,opinion there is no need to have an equal role for both

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and

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.

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,

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must not be banned from

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opportunities considering their equal rights in the country.