Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the current world, many
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against gender discrimination. There are many males as compared to the
females
who have their own role in
police
and armed forces. Many people think that
females
must be given equal priority as males in
such
fields. In my opinion,
women
should be given enough chances in
such
national security , but there is no need for equal participation.
First
, in each and every society the people have huge dreams that they want equal facilities and opportunities.
Besides
, the
women
we can see that
women
are well educated and are capable of doing the jobs in which high risk and pressure are involved.
For instance
, Nirmala Seethaream, the current finance
minister
of India was
also
defence
minister
of India from September 2017 to 2019. Due to the demise of Arun Jaitley former Finance
Minister
she got an opportunity as finance
Minister
. Her role as the defence
minister
indicates that
women
's
also
have an ability to perform jobs that are considered for
men
.
Secondly
, there are many positions involved in army and
police
divisions, where the employees need to work inside the office working as an analyst, which can be occupied by the
females
.
On the other hand
, working as a
police
or army personal
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requires a high physical strength which makes it more suitable for the
men
to do the job, where it is clear that
men
have more strength than
females
. The security forces of a country must go through tough situations like crawling through rough terrains, carrying heavy ammunition.
For example
, take the case of the
police
force who daily encounter rigorous fights on the street with heavy arms and safety equipment,
Therefore
, as per some female analyst, if the government sets an equal opportunity for
women
in
such
fields, it will reduce the efficiency of the force, To conclude, employment in the
police
or army requires high physical power. In my ,opinion there is no need to have an equal role for both
men
and
women
.
However
,
women
must not be banned from
such
opportunities considering their equal rights in the country.
Submitted by Shaunak Desai on

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