2. In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Rising crime in the world. It is having to be a very important

problem

in many countries. We need to find out how to win

this

war before

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you.

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of all, we need to know

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the main reason

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crime

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the crime

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. In my opinion, the biggest

problem

people

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who do

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criminality is

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of money for their basic needs. You might say that all of them can find a

job

to close the basic needs, and you will be right.

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, just a

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of the

people

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with enough salary. Another

part

had

financial

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problem

in childhood and could not get educated.

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, the level of basic needs varies from person to person. The

first

part

of

people

could have a big family and some

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with their

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search. They might have

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house and need to pay

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a lot of

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. Another

part

could not have a family but have some problems with their health. Or

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they

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parents might have some problems with it, so they need to buy expensive medicaments. Of course, no one from the

people

from each group

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not want to be

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homeless, so they are going to do some crime to get

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quick money in a short time. Now we need to ask ourselves what steps can be taken to minimize

criminal

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rate in our society. I think, the families who do not

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enough money for themselves have to go to rallies against the government. Politicians must accept social laws to help the

people

to find the

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, to help with their children education, at least to

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the minimal earns. All the

people

have a right to a dignified life

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so that they would not have a criminal mind.