Many governments spend a lot of money on art. Some people think this investment in art is necessary, but others say the money is better spent on improving health and education. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is generally accepted that art enriches society and plays a valuable role in its culture and history.
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investment in galleries,
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organizations and other art-related matters, others feel that
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money
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should be spent on public
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essay, I will consider both views and explain why I agree that
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funding of the
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should be redirected. Those who
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government
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funding usually argue that it is essential to maintain a healthy
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scene. In Australia, the
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pours millions of dollars into
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sector, with the National Gallery alone receiving over $8 million annually.
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institutions, it is claimed, are pillars of society, and
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from the
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makes them more accessible. Indeed, it is free to enter most public galleries and museums in Australia, thanks to the
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's
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. Smaller art groups and emergency artist
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benefit from
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funding, and without it, many worry that
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bodies would not survive and that society would be poorer for it. There are others,
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, myself included, who feel that these fears are unfounded
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and that taxpayers'
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would be more wisely spent on
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that benefit the entire community. Already, many
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organisation not only survive but thrive without
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handouts. The museum of Old and New Art in Tasmania,
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, is the
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's major tourist attraction, despite earning
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solely from ticket sales and private investors.
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kind of self-sufficiency supports the claim that
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should
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go to hospitals which could certainly use more staff, more wards and better technology or schools where the
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could be put towards updating facilities, hiring more teachers or improving their resources. These are
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used by every citizen and, in many cases, they are severely underfunded. In conclusion, even though
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support
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of the
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has been a long tradition, there are many other ways for artists and organisations to raise funds. It is more important for the
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to spend on vital
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such
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as education and healthcare.
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