The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Health
has been an important point of discussion in recent years. It is argued that
people
’s
health
will deteriorate in the future. I completely agree with
this
opinion and think that
people
’s well-being is worsening both physically and mentally.
Firstly
,
people
are less careful with their physical
health
. Nowadays, many novel treatments have made a huge breakthrough and
thus
, diseases are claimed to be easier to combat.
As a result
,
people
started to pay less attention to keeping fit because they think that it is simple to regain
health
.
For example
,
although
two-thirds of chronic diseases are preventable by implementing a healthy lifestyle, the number of
people
with
such
diseases are still on the rise as the government increases the investment made in treatments.
This
shows that
people
lack awareness of disease prevention and can lead to deteriorating
health
conditions.
Secondly
, stress-related disorders have become more prevalent.
People
, especially younger generations, are living in a society that has become increasingly competitive. The job market requires more effort to land in and to hold one’s place in a position. Meanwhile, prices for vehicles and homes have reached a record high, and both are pointing to
further
rise. These factors lead to immense pressure felt by
people
, which deteriorates their mental
health
by causing anxiety, depression. In fact, the percentage of
people
experiencing stress, anxiety, and depression has nearly doubled in Australia over the past five decades. In conclusion, I think that the benchmark for
people
’s
health
will be lowered in the coming years as
people
are less proactive in maintaining
health
and more prone to suffer from external stress.
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