Some people thinks it’s better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believeqdisagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The question of whether it is to choose
friends
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who share the same
opinions
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or those who sometimes disagree is an ongoing debate.
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some people argue that it is preferable to have like-minded
friends
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, others believe that
friendship
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with differing
opinions
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can be more enriching.
This
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essay will examine both
opinions
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before providing my own decision based on my personal analysis. On the first hand, choosing
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with
same
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opinion is undoubtedly
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a better
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option as it creates harmony in
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life and
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to reduce conflicts among
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the friend
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friend
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friends
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circle. As an example,
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discussing a topic at any meeting,
friends
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with similar
mentality
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express their decision in
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direction the meeting ends with no conflicts.
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, all participants can come to
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undisputable conclusion.
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, simply
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peace and harmony is created.
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, like-minded attitudes between
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helps
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to create a common understanding
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increase internal bonding among
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.
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practice not only
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cooperating
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but
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establishes peace in every mind.
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, the
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of showing
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an alternative
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mentality
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among
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opens a scope for personal correction. Whenever
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dispute with others
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their personal
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, it helps
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someone
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them
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to rethink
own
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their own
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speech and rediscover
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their own
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thoughts.
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, who has negativity about
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the poor
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and spreads
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may have some realization if any of his
friends
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tell the opposite to him. Sometimes
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brings
someone
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's wrong thinking in front.
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, he gets an opportunity for
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and
self correction
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.
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is certainly adds
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a
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value to
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's personality and encourages
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them to
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be more positive and optimistic.
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,
different
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concept from
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fosters critical thinking
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improves
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problem solving
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skills.
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enables
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in avoiding
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unwanted
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. In conclusion,
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friends
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with like-minded
mentality
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provides
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peace and comfort,
friends
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who disagree occasionally
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give
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them tan
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tan
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an
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opportunity to improve personally. To my consent,
friends
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with dissimilar
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opinions
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should be more acceptable which opens the scope for us to be more ethical
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people
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with morality.

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Task Achievement
Consider clarifying your thesis statement in the introduction to more clearly indicate your own opinion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Ensure that you maintain consistency in your arguments. Use clearer transitions and logical connectors between sentences and paragraphs to improve flow.
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Add more specific examples or anecdotes that illustrate the points you are making, which will strengthen your argument.
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Your essay presents both perspectives on the topic, which is essential for a balanced discussion.
Coherence and Cohesion
You have good topic sentences that outline the main ideas of each paragraph, giving clarity to your argument.
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