Some people think that social media platforms are useful for business and making new friends, while others think that such websites are harmful. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of social media.
With the development of technology, the use of social
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websites can bring more good than harm has been heated. In Linking Words
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, what the teenagers are doing is not just for sharing but seeking more recognition from Linking Words
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whom they don't know in the forms of pressing the 'like' button for their post. In Use synonyms
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way, posts with numerous 'like' may make them feel satisfied while any bad comment may cause depression and lead to low self-esteem.
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help remove the geographical barrier for us, we should not overlook the harms they can bring to our mental health. In order to reap the benefits of different Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...