You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:  describe the situation  explain your problems and why it is difficult to work  say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing you to inform a problem that I have been trying to deal with

roommate

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my roommate

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. I live in South Residence,

Jelicoe

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Jellicoe

building on 3rd floor and I share the residence with two other girls. Well, the main issue here is because they are noisy when they get to the apartment after their evening classes and I usually have to wake up before 7 am.

Also

, they never clean their own late mess.

Then

, in the morning, everything is out of place.

Besides

, I work part-time in the library and when they forget to deliver their books, they ask me to do

for

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it for

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them. I do not feel comfortable doing something unethical, but they are usually pushy and basically force me to do that. More than that, I need to read a lot during the weekends and as they are disorganised and untidy, I do housekeep

instead

. I would be extremely glad if you could switch me

for

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a single apartment, the studio, in

Alba

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the Alba

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building with shared bathrooms. There, I will be able to follow my own routine and life duties without

further

worry. I am looking forward to hearing back from you. Yours faithfully, Manuela Tiradentes

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