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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree?

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It is argued that, in the world in which everything going to be digitalized, electronic
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 are successors of printed
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 it may convince some
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 that due to some benefits which digital
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 have nobody will buy printed
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 of them in the future, I think that printed
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 do not fade away completely. Digital
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 have many advantages.
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, they are accessible easily. Individuals can read them on their electronic devices everywhere, whereas, carrying printed
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 everywhere is not easy.
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, digital
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 of them cut off the costs of printing and publishing,
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, their lower prices.
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, every year millions of trees are being cut for making paper. If digital
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 take printed
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' place, the fewer trees and forests will be destroyed, so the Earth planet will be less damaged.
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, printed
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 have some benefits which digital
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 do not have. It seems that printed
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 are better at conveying information, specially printed
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. Studies suggest that if individuals would like to remember what they read in the long term, it is better to use physical
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. According to researchers , the group of
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 who had used a Kindle -The Amazon company's electronic device for reading digital
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 and materials- could less remember events in a novel than another group who had read the same novel in print.
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, it seems that printed
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 still will be demanded by
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 in the future. In conclusion, as far as can be seen, in the future, the number of publishing the printed
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 and
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 will be decreased dramatically.
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 will use digital
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 who use printed
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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