The advances in air travel are focused only for the upper class and this seems to have left others with no benefit. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

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The
airlines
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lately have been modifying their
aeroplanes
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with many advanced features for their rich passengers ,
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leaving the recession and lower levels left behind as not benefiting from the great changes
airlines
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have done.I totally agree that the lower
class
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have been left behind with no effort to make the
seats
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and
service
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in the aeroplane more comfortable and enhancing the services that are provided to them
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, the high-
class
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community uses the same transportation as the middle and lower classes as one to mention is the
aeroplanes
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. We all know that the more you have money, the better things you can buy and that depends on individual income and how the governments and
companies
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provide the best services and products in return for high taxes and a lot of money . As in
airlines
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companies
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,
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, they have been recently providing the high
class
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more than just
first
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class
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seats
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with an extra meal compared to the
economy
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class
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,
however
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,they have added many more things,for ,example Emirates
airlines
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have added rooms in their
aeroplanes
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which consist of a bed ,tv , expensive lights , private fridge , shower and etc.
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costs about 20,000 dollars per flight.
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, the
economy
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class
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in
aeroplanes
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have not been enhanced for a very long time ,
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leaving the middle and lower classes with basic
service
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and the rise annually for the flight ticket . The
economy
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class
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in most of the
airlines
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provide a low weight for packages , small
seats
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for 3 a row ,one small meal and no advanced technology , uncomfortable chairs with limited privacy and a small restroom.
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has left the
economy
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level behind with no caring for any upgrades, for ,example
last
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time a took a flight in the
economy
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class
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in an airline company called flynas it was the worst experience ever , the
seats
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were so small and uncomfortable ,with limited leg space and a broken air condition for my seat ,as
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for the
first
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-
class
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the
seats
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where big leather comfortable ones and the
service
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provided were much better which consisted of sheets to sleep two meals plus a drink and even a private good size restroom in conclusion ,
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agree that the air travel
companies
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are working hard to provide more for the high
class
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while leaving the middle and lower ones behind .
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problem in the future will cause
companies
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to fail and close for their bad
service
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for the recession level which
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, they are their most customers .
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