The advances in air travel are focused only for the upper class and this seems to have left others with no benefit. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE

The
airlines
lately have been modifying their
aeroplanes
with many advanced features for their rich passengers ,
therefore
leaving the recession and lower levels left behind as not benefiting from the great changes
airlines
have done.I totally agree that the lower
class
have been left behind with no effort to make the
seats
and
service
in the aeroplane more comfortable and enhancing the services that are provided to them
furthermore
, the high-
class
community uses the same transportation as the middle and lower classes as one to mention is the
aeroplanes
. We all know that the more you have money, the better things you can buy and that depends on individual income and how the governments and
companies
provide the best services and products in return for high taxes and a lot of money . As in
airlines
companies
,
moreover
, they have been recently providing the high
class
more than just
first
-
class
seats
with an extra meal compared to the
economy
class
,
however
,they have added many more things,for ,example Emirates
airlines
have added rooms in their
aeroplanes
which consist of a bed ,tv , expensive lights , private fridge , shower and etc.
this
costs about 20,000 dollars per flight.
however
, the
economy
class
in
aeroplanes
have not been enhanced for a very long time ,
for instance
leaving the middle and lower classes with basic
service
and the rise annually for the flight ticket . The
economy
class
in most of the
airlines
provide a low weight for packages , small
seats
for 3 a row ,one small meal and no advanced technology , uncomfortable chairs with limited privacy and a small restroom.
This
has left the
economy
level behind with no caring for any upgrades, for ,example
last
time a took a flight in the
economy
class
in an airline company called flynas it was the worst experience ever , the
seats
were so small and uncomfortable ,with limited leg space and a broken air condition for my seat ,as
in contrast
for the
first
-
class
the
seats
where big leather comfortable ones and the
service
provided were much better which consisted of sheets to sleep two meals plus a drink and even a private good size restroom in conclusion ,
i
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I
show examples
agree that the air travel
companies
are working hard to provide more for the high
class
while leaving the middle and lower ones behind .
This
problem in the future will cause
companies
to fail and close for their bad
service
for the recession level which
for instance
, they are their most customers .
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