You and a friend recently went on a holiday together. there is a problem with photos you have taken during the holiday. Write a letter to your friend to ask for a particular shot in your letter explain . what the problem is with your photos . say which photo you would like him or her to send you . explain why you need this Photo.
Dear John,
I hope you are doing well. The reason for
this
letter is that I got some similar photos
from our last
vacation tour that we spent in Niagara. I think this
happened because we got a double copy of each photo. Similarly
, I missed all the photos
that we took in Elgin Park which was incredible.
You can mail me only the park photoshoot or the one which we clicked on the eye wheel on my address. I already mailed you the twin photos
that I had.
Moreover
, those are some of my best and recent photos
and I am planning to use those pictures in the photo competition that is
going to be held at my college in the near future. Which we
have to submit one of our best collections and if I am selected from Correct pronoun usage
We
this
competition then
I will get a chance to participate in the annual modelling performance.
I know you will send this
as soon as you get this
letter.
Best wishes,
Harpreet.Submitted by harpreet291kaur on
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