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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet.While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#students #internet #effects #purposes
It is true that the
Internet
 is becoming popular among
students
.Even though the
Internet
 provides a lot of opportunities for learners,some think that it has many harmful impacts and should be banned the use of educational purposes.Personally,I completely disagree with
this
 point of view. On the one hand,I admit that the
Internet
 can sometimes
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 bad aspects on the
students
.
Firstly
,if
students
 utilize the
Internet
 during the lesson,it could interrupt their attention to the subjects.
In other words
,if using the
Internet
 does not restrict,it may
also
 spoil
student's
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 brain.To elucidate,now there
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the
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 number of harmful
vudeos
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videos
, contents can be seen that on social websites and they may create
invevitable
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inevitable
 problems.After watching these videos, teenagers might copy those actions for themselves. In spite of
above
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 arguments,I still retain my position in
this
 matter.The
Internet
 not only useful for educational curriculum
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but
also
 beneficial for our daily life.
This
 is simply because
,
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during the
class
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students
 can utilize the
Internet
 for academic purposes.
For instance
,they can find fruitful
informations
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information
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 as well as e-books on the
Internet
.Nowadays some books are unique and
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 hard to find them anywhere.In that case,
students
 tend to use the
Internet
, because
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they
 not only read books
,
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but
also
 can print them.Another contributing factor is that
students
 now learn subjects even without commuting to universities.
Last
 year,countries all around the world underwent
a great deal of
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 hardships.
Then
,all universities moved to online courses due to the Coronavirus.
As a result
,the
Internet
 has become commonplace among universities. In summary,
although
 using the
Internet
 may
triggers
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 some problems to education,I would argue that
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the advantages
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 of it outweigh the drawbacks.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • independent learning
  • critical thinking
  • excessive reliance
  • hinder
  • crucial
  • problem-solving
  • overly dependent
  • diversity
  • perspectives
  • global cultures
  • enriching
  • unrestricted
  • information overload
  • discerning
  • credible sources
  • incorporation
  • engagement
  • adaptivity
  • personalized learning
  • innovative
  • pedagogy
  • digital age
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