You have just started a course in a college which has no sports facilities of its own. Write a letter to the manager of the nearest private sports club. In your letter: •introduce yourself, •say why you are interested in this sports club •ask some questions about the club e.g. facilities, members, costs
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Dear Sir or Madam,
Hope you're doing well. My name is Kunwar and I have recently joined a private
College
besides
the sports club
owned by you. I am writing this
letter because I want to join the sports club
. It is also
convenient for me to attend the club
because it situated
at the nearest place of the Add a missing verb
is situated
College
.
In fact, the College
does not have proper sports facilities and I cannot live without physical activities.
As I earlier mentioned that
I am a new student Correct word choice
apply
Change preposition
at
of
the Change preposition
at
College
and enrolled here for the diploma certification in Political Science. After my class, I have plenty of spare time and I think, it is a better idea to spend my free time in a positive activity at the club
rather than scrolling my mobile phone.
If you don't mind, please provide details of the facilities and also
describe how many member
are registered in the Change to a plural noun
members
club
.
Please don't forget to inform about
the charges of the Correct pronoun usage
us about
club
and also
explain the procedure of
depositing the fee.
I hope you will take my humble request seriously and Change preposition
for
allowed
me to join the Wrong verb form
allow
club
to utilise my spare time with positive
approach.
Yours Faithfully,
KunwarCorrect article usage
a positive
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear, distinct idea to maintain structure and clarity.
Task Achievement
For an enhanced task response, consider explicitly stating your specific interests or which facilities you're most looking forward to using at the club.
Overall
You might want to check your letter for minor grammatical errors or typing mistakes that could be easily corrected with a quick review.
Structure
The letter is well-structured with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
Content
You have effectively communicated your intentions and reasons for wanting to join the sports club.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.