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Some people believe that volunteer work should be a requirement for teenagers in high schools (for instance working for a charity). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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In recent times, the need to find valuable
work
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experience
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 and to keep teenagers busy is an issue all over the world. Nowadays, it is believed by some that an obligatory volunteer program for high schoolers is a solution for
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 issue. It is in my opinion, through these programmes’ adolescents would find appreciate their community more, develop invaluable
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experience
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 and improve their social skills.
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, youngsters would find an appreciation for their community, which they would not have seen
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 through
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 program.
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, a student would take pride in
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 what they accomplished if they completed a job cleaning graffiti or helping organize a community event, and
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 they would feel more appreciative of their neighbourhood.
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, since these students responsible for their
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 duties, they will gain invaluable
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experience
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.
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, if a student is coaching a team sport, they will be in charge of other children, being responsible for their well-being, resulting in gaining
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 in leadership and organization.
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 school can be an isolating
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, volunteer
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 could allow them to socialize more with others.
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 can be accomplished while a student is doing activities,
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 as working on team projects or speaking with others to complete their
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 duties, which would lead to a more extroverted individual. In conclusion, teenagers would discover a love for their neighbourhood, gained valuable skills, and improve their social abilities.
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, it is in my opinion that all high schools ought to include
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 program in their curriculum, as it would benefit the youth and ultimately benefit society.
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