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it is often claimed that electronic devices will soon replace paper books. Do you agree or disagree?

#devices #paper #books
Undoubtedly, technology has touched every sphere of life and
education
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 sector is not an exception. Many people believe that
computers
 and other gadgets will
takeover
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 the role of printed
books
 and articles completely. Despite plenty of material is available in electronic form, I do not think that
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 of paper material for reading would come to an end due to its accessibility to everyone and no detrimental effect on
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the eyes
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.
To begin
 with, electronic gadgets can never match the comfort level of reading on
books
.
Computers
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always
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aways
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always
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 need charging after a specific time if they are to b used for
longer
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a longer
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 period but there is no
such
 condition in paper articles and magazines. A reader can
use
 them for as much time as he wants.
Besides
, it is not possible for everyone to own an electronic device in
third
 world countries where
majority
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the majority
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 of the population is impoverished.
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 of
books
 is more feasible in
such
 kind of situations and because of
this
 reason, paper material can never become fully unpopular.
Furthermore
, reading magazines and articles does not put any negative impact on
eyes
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the eyes
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 of
reader
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the reader
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 whereas using laptops or
computers
 for
such
 purpose is not appropriate for
person
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a person
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 with sensitive
eyes
. LED screens used these days discharge radiations which can cause irritation in
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 or adversely affect
eyesight
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the eyesight
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 of users.
That is
 why individuals generally prefer
books
 over electronic gadgets. To conclude,
although
computers
 have a lot of benefits still they cannot replace printed material because of ease of
use
, affordability and suitability for
eyes
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the eyes
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.
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