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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Environmental
issues
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 exist everywhere on the planet. Still, we are not seeing any signs of a change. I believe that it is essentially because most
people
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 do not seem to
care
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 about the
environment
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 and solving its
issues
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. Undoubtedly, there is still a reasonable amount of
people
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 who
care
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 about the surrounding.
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 as
people
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 who are replacing some environmentally harmful materials with healthier ones.
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, one of the
issues
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 the
environment
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 is suffering from is the lack of trees and woods because
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 are chopping them down to manufacture paper. Nowadays, companies are inventing iPods and other technology supplies as alternatives to paper.
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,
people
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 who do not
care
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 about the
environment
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, unfortunately, outweigh those who
care
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. The
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 recognized behaviour that shows
people
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’s ignorance is that
people
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 tend to choose their comfort over the
environment
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. An example of
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 car usage.
People
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 prefer to use their cars
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 of walking, cycling or even adopting public transport even that it is cheaper as well as a safer way to travel. Streets around the world, especially in urban areas, are turning into
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big traffic jam. Roads are filled with vehicles, which affect the
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 by producing carbon dioxide into the air, which harms the
environment
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 and results in air pollution;
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, global warming will increase.
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,
people
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 do not take environmental problems seriously. They ignore its affection on the earth,
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 human’s lives.
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,
people
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’s desire to waste plastic. Plastic has a great role in destroying the
environment
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 in various fields. Despite
people
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’s knowledge of
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 and that it takes plastic hundreds of years to decompose, they continue to consume it in enormous quantities every day. In conclusion, environmental
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 are dramatically worsened. It cannot witness a turnover if
people
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 do not wake up and look after it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritize
  • immediate needs
  • connect with
  • distant
  • abstract
  • economic considerations
  • growing awareness
  • active participation
  • initiatives
  • movements
  • impacts
  • well-being
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