Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A healthy country is a wealthy country. Free
health
treatment should be provided in all Use synonyms
nations
in the world Use synonyms
inlcuding
the latest advanced medical service. It is agreed that some of the medical Correct your spelling
including
treatments
are so expensive but Use synonyms
goverments
should introduce free service Correct your spelling
governments
government
health
plans for Use synonyms
people
and I totally agree that all countries should implement Use synonyms
this
.
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To begin
with, it is purely government responsibility to build healthy societies in their Linking Words
nations
as it is commonly believed that healthier localities can contribute to Use synonyms
nations
growth in terms of taxes. Use synonyms
In other words
, when Linking Words
people
are good and fit Use synonyms
then
only they participate in revenue generation. Linking Words
For example
, when governments collect money in terms of the tax, Linking Words
then
it Linking Words
the
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the duty of the nation
the nation's duty
nations
duty to safe Use synonyms
gaurd
their public. Nowadays, there is so much Correct your spelling
guard
of
advancement in Change preposition
apply
the
medical treatment but many of them are limited to corporate hospitals.
Big countries like China and India have more poor Correct article usage
apply
people
and they are very far from the government medical policies. And in well-developed Use synonyms
contries
Correct your spelling
countries
also
many Linking Words
health
Use synonyms
treatments
are so expensive and not Use synonyms
accesible
to all. Correct your spelling
accessible
For instance
, Linking Words
treatments
Use synonyms
such
as heart and brain diseases are too costly, Linking Words
thus
, Linking Words
people
who are rich can pay for those Use synonyms
treatments
and for Use synonyms
poor
it is nightmare. Correct article usage
the poor
Hence
, Linking Words
health
departments of each country should think of these and make Use synonyms
helath
policies Correct your spelling
health
such
that the Linking Words
health
care systems Use synonyms
accepts
all common Change the verb form
accept
people
and Use synonyms
that is
the only way every citizen contributes to their Linking Words
nation
growth.
To conclude, even though it is very difficult to provide free Replace the word
national
health
service for each citizen of their nation, all countries must prepare a Use synonyms
well integrated
and organized Add a hyphen
well-integrated
Use synonyms
health-care
system so that even the poor Correct your spelling
healthcare
people
can get the benefit of Use synonyms
such
medical plans. And Linking Words
this
is the best way to make their citizens healthy.Linking Words
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