Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A healthy country is a wealthy country. Free
health
treatment should be provided in all nations
in the world inlcuding
the latest advanced medical service. It is agreed that some of the medical Correct your spelling
including
treatments
are so expensive but goverments
should introduce free service Correct your spelling
governments
government
health
plans for people
and I totally agree that all countries should implement this
.
To begin
with, it is purely government responsibility to build healthy societies in their nations
as it is commonly believed that healthier localities can contribute to nations
growth in terms of taxes. In other words
, when people
are good and fit then
only they participate in revenue generation. For example
, when governments collect money in terms of the tax, then
it the
Change to a genitive case
the duty of the nation
the nation's duty
nations
duty to safe gaurd
their public. Nowadays, there is so much Correct your spelling
guard
of
advancement in Change preposition
apply
the
medical treatment but many of them are limited to corporate hospitals.
Big countries like China and India have more poor Correct article usage
apply
people
and they are very far from the government medical policies. And in well-developed contries
Correct your spelling
countries
also
many health
treatments
are so expensive and not accesible
to all. Correct your spelling
accessible
For instance
, treatments
such
as heart and brain diseases are too costly, thus
, people
who are rich can pay for those treatments
and for poor
it is nightmare. Correct article usage
the poor
Hence
, health
departments of each country should think of these and make helath
policies Correct your spelling
health
such
that the health
care systems accepts
all common Change the verb form
accept
people
and that is
the only way every citizen contributes to their nation
growth.
To conclude, even though it is very difficult to provide free Replace the word
national
health
service for each citizen of their nation, all countries must prepare a well integrated
and organized Add a hyphen
well-integrated
health-care
system so that even the poor Correct your spelling
healthcare
people
can get the benefit of such
medical plans. And this
is the best way to make their citizens healthy.Submitted by kishore.likith on
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