You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
People
have different views about whether the government should host
an international sporting event or don’t. While using money in education instead
of using in sport event can sometimes be useful, I believe that holding a sports
tournament is ultimate for the country.
On the one hand, holding games
events
can be a source of motivation for adult and it made active them. These events
are the best way to strengthen national bonds among citizens and some kind of games
may help to build teen’s self-confidence while playing sports
like football. Sporting events
attract many international visitor and businesses and also
leaders can have a chance to meet with others country leaders with friendliness without tension and trade. Each nation can share their foods, costume and can also
know other citizens’ lifestyle and get foreign friends. It can therefore
be argued that sporting events
should be held in order to improve language skills, economy, education system, general knowledge.
On the other hand
, a few people
don’t like holding games
events
because of some reason especially it cost a lot of tax which have to use in education and the country’s basic needs. Hosting the games
is even more costly than the other process for example
once a city host
the sports
event , cities commonly add roads , enhance airport, and contrast rail line to accommodate the large influx of people
. Sporting events
have always come with a huge price tag for their host
country ,especially developing countries. Sometimes it is not fair for the country’s people
,for ,instance Brazil government managed to find $14 billion to host
games
, money that could’ve been spent to benefits poor and working Brazilians. These examples highlight a small picture of the inequality these games
bring to hosting countries’ public.
In conclusion, I can understand why some people
dislike hosting sports
events
, but it seems to me that hosting games
events
is much more helpful in the country’s relationships between so many countries and can give a unique experience to locals.Submitted by Shwe Yamin on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
