Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The

health

of humanity is completely related to

lifestyle

. Over time, many pupils have an unhealthy manner of living. Somebody claimes,

this

defect is referred to lack of proper education of

children

which have to be done by

parents

and

schools

. In

this

essay, I will bring reasons to show that I totally agree with

this

opinion. The educational role of

parents

have

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been

strated

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started

stated

at the beginning time of the birth, at the time of zero. In fact, their roleplay as the

first

teachers of everybody, have a significant impact on

future

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of

children

.

Consequently

,

parents

with inadequate information about

lifestyle

, can not train their pupils well, before school age.

Therefore

,

parents

have to learn about the

lifestyle

and

then

transfer that knowledge and information to their

children

.

In addition

,

schools

have a lot of dut in the training of

children

and maintaining their

health

. Unfortunately,

as a result

of heavy duties, a few courses,

such

as manner of skills to live properly, were neglected at

schools

. So, due to the improper lessons at

schools

, a considerable number of students do not have any familiarity with a healthy style of living. Lack of these lessons at

schools

or homes

,

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are going to negatively influence

on

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the

health

of students. To sum up, to my mind,

parents

and

schools

have very important responsibilities for the present and future

health

of

children

, which could be achieved by teaching and training

lifestyle

courses. In my opinion,

parents

have to be educated properly about

lifestyle

, before childbearing, whereas topics which are related to

this

have to be highlighted at school, too.