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Politician’s private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#politician’s #lives #newspapers
Nowadays, most of the big shots are on
public
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the public
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 radar. From
country’s
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the country’s
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 richest person to
politicians
 to school’s principal, the general people are interested in their lives more than before.
The society
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Society
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 has become many folds aware than the earlier times regarding the lifestyle of
politicians
 especially. Reasonable disclosure of their spending and personal
life
 should be reported as well.
To begin
 with, in
majority
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the majority
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 of the cases, the money allotted to
politicians
 for specific works is not utilised for the purpose it was given to them
at
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in
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 the
first
 place.
For instance
, when a politician is aided
for
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 the construction of a road in his city by the government, he transfers a major part of the compensation for his own personal benefit and constructs the road with
low quality
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 material.
Consequently
, accidents happen because of
this
 forgery.
Moreover
, the
politicians
 live
a
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lavish
life
. They spend
huge
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a huge
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 amount of cash for their family functions.
Therefore
, reporting of
such
 kind of favours and personal benefits is necessary so that the community is informed
is informed
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about the tactics of their valuable earnings being expended by the
politicians
.
On the contrary
, explicit posting of each and every aspect of
politician’s
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 personal
life
 would be unjustified. Sometimes, the media crosses their boundaries and circulates private moments of their journey which is highly unethical. In my opinion,
transmission
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the transmission
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 of
politician’s
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a politician’s
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 own
life
 should be allowed to some degree. Poking and publicising the intimate
life
 is inhuman and wrong on the reporter’s part. To conclude, limited communication should be promoted
instead
 of rampaging through a politician’s existence. The officials should regularize the content to be pasted.
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