Many people believe that money is a good gift for a teenager while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the number of people who give
money
to teenagers as a
gift
increases. Some people insist that it is good to give
money
for
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youngsters as a present, while others opine that
money
is not an ideal
gift
. In
this
essay, I am going to discuss both
side
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of the arguments and examine the reasons why I believe
money
is a good
gift
for the younger generation.
To begin
with, there are two reasons why I believe giving
money
has
merits
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.
Firstly
, children are able to learn how to use
money
while young. When children are given
money
, they have several options which are saving, using and investing.
Thus
, they are forced to consider the best option. It
help
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youngsters to develop their ability to think and to become more independent. On top of that, they are able to obtain what they want. In fact, gifts that are given
from
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others do not match their tastes.
On the other hand
, there are several drawbacks
as
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to giving
money
as a
gift
. At
first
,
money
will not remain for a long time. In general gifts from others accompany memories, and those help to recall the memories.
However
, if teenagers are given
money
, it is difficult to keep memories with
such
gifts, since they tend to use
money
unknowingly.
Secondly
, the younger generation makes mistake as to the usage of
money
. In fact, parents in Japan do not willing to give
money
as a
gift
, because they really care about children’s safety. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the arguments have merits.
However
, I believe
money
is still an ideal
gift
for teenagers.
This
is because it helps them to learn how to use
money
correctly, and they can get what they want exactly.
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