Many people believe that money is a good gift for a teenager while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, the number of people who give

money

to teenagers as a

gift

increases. Some people insist that it is good to give

money

for

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youngsters as a present, while others opine that

money

is not an ideal

gift

. In

this

essay, I am going to discuss both

side

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of the arguments and examine the reasons why I believe

money

is a good

gift

for the younger generation.

To begin

with, there are two reasons why I believe giving

money

has

merits

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.

Firstly

, children are able to learn how to use

money

while young. When children are given

money

, they have several options which are saving, using and investing.

Thus

, they are forced to consider the best option. It

help

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youngsters to develop their ability to think and to become more independent. On top of that, they are able to obtain what they want. In fact, gifts that are given

from

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others do not match their tastes.

On the other hand

, there are several drawbacks

as

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to giving

money

as a

gift

. At

first

,

money

will not remain for a long time. In general gifts from others accompany memories, and those help to recall the memories.

However

, if teenagers are given

money

, it is difficult to keep memories with

such

gifts, since they tend to use

money

unknowingly.

Secondly

, the younger generation makes mistake as to the usage of

money

. In fact, parents in Japan do not willing to give

money

as a

gift

, because they really care about children’s safety. In conclusion, I believe both sides of the arguments have merits.

However

, I believe

money

is still an ideal

gift

for teenagers.

This

is because it helps them to learn how to use

money

correctly, and they can get what they want exactly.