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Scientists predict that all people will choose talk the same language in the future. Do you think this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, it is quite ordinary that people living in non-
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 speaking countries will usually take
english
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English
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 as a
second
 language to learn. Because of that fact, some experts believe that in the coming years, eventually, all societies will choose
an
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 universal idiom to talk
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 In
this
 essay, I will discuss
this
 trend before concluding if I consider it a positive or a negative outcome.
To begin
 with, any tongue has been derived from an antique one and has taken centuries to be refined. Amid the process of learning how to speak and acquiring the idiom to an individual's personality,
psychologycally
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psychologically
psychological
, it
also
 brings the sense of belonging to a community, assisting in the process of building a cultural heritage.
Therefore
, due to the historical load
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 the language construction, having differences among the myriad and types of idioms are essential to
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 an identity inside a group of people, resulting in these cultures
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 into oblivion, if the common communication is chosen. In stark contrast, there are a lot of beneficial aspects resulting from opting to eliminate
tongue
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 barrier.
For instance
, it would assist in nations' exchange of information and
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negotiations
.
Moreover
, a plethora of individuals
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 job opportunities, despite having soft skills demanded, due to the lack of a
second
 tongue acquaintance,
thus
, the implementation of a sole one would settle
this
 issue.
Finally
, foreign travel experiences would be more pleasant since individuals would not have to struggle
trying
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 to communicate.
Hence
, the mere dialect in
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long-term
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 would result in a unified world, as nations would interpret each other effortlessly. To summarize, each perspective has its own
merites
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merits
. People opting for
an
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 universal language have
its
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 negative and positive points. Thereby, if the implementation is considered, the different communities must analyse the consequences before implementing it.
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