More and more movies are being released directly onto streaming platforms, like Netflix and Disney Plus, rather than being played in cinemas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
The number of films released in cinemas is decreasing significantly, owing to the fact that they are now launched on websites and applications like Netflix and Disney Plus.
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has numerous benefits like cost efficiency, it reduces family time and the impact of a social message being perceived by society.
The main advantage of online streaming websites is that it is a cost-efficient option for both consumers and filmmakers. Audiences get a wide variety of genres and languages to choose from, by subscribing to a single service, and Linking Words
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access the service at the convenience of their home. On the other end, producers generate revenue by selling their productions to companies for displaying it on the company's webpage. Linking Words
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, the impact of a social message being delivered through movies is reduced considering the fact that the big screen experience is more captivating and influential for the masses. Linking Words
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, undoubtedly with the introduction of software applications like Netflix and Disney Plus, people are saving money spent in a cinema hall. Linking Words
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