In some countries, an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A plethora of developed countries citizen's is obese
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, tackling a lot of health issue due to heavy consumption of fast and processed Linking Words
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. Governing bodies of these nations should take netizen's health into consideration and impose high Use synonyms
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reform on outlets serving unhealthy meals.Use synonyms
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essay agrees with the statement as obesity can kill people and put them at high risk of a shorter life span ,filling the hospital beds and graves faster.
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, The main issue is processed Linking Words
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is easy to manufacture as they are made in bulk.Use synonyms
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, They are available in the vending machine outside school,colleges and offices making them easier to reach and consume . Linking Words
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but not the list prices of unhealthy chips and soda are lower than healthy meals which increases its buying power. To curb Linking Words
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problem government should prosecute heavy Linking Words
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companies making them expensive .A good example is in America an enormous amount of teenagers are obese due to the high-fat content of Use synonyms
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available in school/restaurants lunches whereas in Japan it's the opposite. The government in Japan has imposed a high Use synonyms
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as KFC,burger king and Chipotle making them costlier for the general public.
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On the other hand
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we can make individuals realise the peril of their Linking Words
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delivery app Use synonyms
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as zomato ,swiggy advertise fast Linking Words
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on television and urge the customer to order it unlikely governance can ask them to focus on healthy alternatives. Use synonyms
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inspectors can inspect and ban the items from the market which indulge in heavy sugar,lead, preservatives used in meals Use synonyms
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as noodles ,milkshakes and soda. To illustrate Nestle was banned in India for few years as a lead was found in maggie noodles Linking Words
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hefty fine was imposed tarnishing their brand value. Another example is Patanjali brand in India market themselves for healthy tonics and juices ,Linking Words
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after ,inspection it was concluded that half of their products are unhealthy .
To conclude, eating a healthier meal is a personal choice Linking Words
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leaders of the country can divert their population to healthy choices as the majority of hospitals are getting cancer /heart attack patients in recent times. Policies of a nation can change their citizen's lives apart from higher Linking Words
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be broadcasted to lead people great life.Linking Words
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