Todays teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that

teenagers

nowadays have more stressful lives than before. As far as I am concerned, At the present stage children should help their

parents

at home with general works.

However

, in the following essay, elaborate my viewpoints with relevant examples.

Firstly

, these days

teenagers

are using a lot of social media and facing pressure.

In addition

,

this

current lifestyle for most children prefers to use the

internet

for games till late nights in separate bedrooms without

parents

permission.

Furthermore

,

teenagers

having too much tension because of the modern

internet

world and these days youngster using the

internet

most of the

time

rather than do some physical activities.

However

,

this

internet

will bad effects on juvenile in the future, as they might get sick because of their less sleep.

For instance

, if youth will do some outside activities

then

they will get healthier and stress-free.

Secondly

, most children are more open with their

parents

to make better relationships.

Additionally

, in the current

time

youth are open-minded to share things with their family members to solve small problems. ,

Also

they are getting good trust in the relationship with families, as a juvenile is educated in modern practical studies.

Further

, as far as

teenagers

do not have much to do with their

parents

.

For example

, if youngsters will obey their

parents

and follow the right path

then

they may get more successful in the life with the relationship.

Thirdly

, they do not have stress as they have more facilities are available like gadgets, entertainments source.

Besides

, they are full of stress-free and spending a great

time

with friends, nowadays most of the kids have their own laptops or mobiles to spend on movies and games. To conclude, youngsters nowadays have more stress in their lives than past, as

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society puts extra pressure on them to

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well in their studies, but at the same

time

, due to having more

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this

task can be carried out easily.

Therefore

, in my opinion, youth lives are equally balanced and not stressed in

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