You are attending a course at an evening school. Write a letter to the director of the school with a complaint about the course. In your letter, you should: – Describe the course you are taking. – Explain what you don’t like about the course. – Give your opinion about what should be done about it.

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Dear Mr or Mrs director, I am writing to express my strong dissatisfaction with the course which is starting at 7 pm. I am a student of
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evening school. My name is John in the tenth grade. We have some problems with the English lesson. We are participating in English lessons three times a week with
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Moly White. The course should include all aspects of the English language. Especially, speaking and writing should be provided with basic structure. I appreciate her knowledge and teaching method. But in recent weeks, we faced a lack of attention and felt decreasing in our knowledge. First of all, our
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is coming late for
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lesson approximately 30 minutes frequently. The second thing we noticed is that she is getting rude day by day and sometimes she punishes some students without any reason. In speaking lessons, our
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is wasting time surfing the net and talking on the phone. If it is possible, you explain
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situation to our
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and try to help to solve
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problem by understanding each other. I look forward to hearing your reply and a resolution to our issue. I would be grateful if our
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understood
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matter and provided us with high-quality lessons. Yours sincerely, John Brown

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coherence and cohesion
Try to use a clearer structure with distinct paragraphs for each main point. This will help improve the logical flow of your letter.
task achievement
Provide more specific examples of how the teacher's behavior affects your learning. This will strengthen your complaint.
task achievement
You used a polite tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for a complaint letter.
coherence and cohesion
The letter maintains a generally good level of coherence, especially with the clear introduction and conclusion.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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