Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Many people believe that with advancement in technology, life has become complicated. There are always two sides to a coin, on one side we can see a lot of improvement in our lifestyle and on another

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there are certain challenges that arise due to

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upgrades in technology. In

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we will discuss both

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sides and evaluate which side to lean on. Let's discuss the positive impact

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, latest machines help us to reduce the manual labour that was needed to perform various household tasks.

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is turn gives us time to do things that we enjoy,

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improving the quality of life. Devices like mobile phone along with

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keep us connected to our loved ones, even while we might be miles apart. Like everything else, there are some negative aspects as well. Since

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we can be reached out anytime regardless of where we are,

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our working hours are not fixed to 9-5 and we tend to bring work home, reducing the family time. In some cases,

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may lead to kids feeling neglected and going astray.

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, with recent developments in cameras and

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tracking, we have lost our privacy and we can be tracked all the time. With hidden cameras, we have no idea when we are being filmed or who is capturing our every step. In conclusion,

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of technology has impacted our lives in a massive way. Though it may have its pros and cons

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I believe that

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positive influence outweighs the negative.

shivani22sharmaTue Jun 08 2021

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