When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or a bad thing?

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Nowadays, communication styles have changed significantly because of the fast-paced life and trends from influencers. Deciding

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personality in a short meeting time is a bad thing and there are disadvantages not only including harmfulness to others but

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to one’s self. Using first impressions to define a new friend is not a well-rounded way to socialize. In fact, people need time and shared experience to well understand other's characteristics and personalities. Without the basic information, people may probably be unable to make accurate comments about them.

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, a young lady might label a young man as ill-behaved because of a leak of wholistic understandings, leading to a rumour among friends that the young man is probably not a nice person.

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kind of misjudgment can cause trouble for the young man, hurt his feelings and place him in an embarrassing position which might lead to emotional problems and stress.

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, placing trust and love in new friends based on the feelings that are produced from first sight can draw risks because of the lack of understanding. some people might base their on another’s appearance and clothing making conclusions about a new friend's

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personality, in

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way they imagine a certain profile for that new friend who might have a purpose of getting close to them.

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, a woman may fall in love with an attractive-looking gentleman , who has ill manners and a stressful mindset, leading to home violence in the future.

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, the relationship can lead to serious issues. In conclusion, deciding whether an individual is nice in a short time does not bring benefit to everyday life.

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, they have a harmful impact on friendship as dangers are obviously listed above. It not only emotionally hurts their feelings but

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causes trouble.

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first impression
initial judgment
stereotypes
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non-verbal cues
body language
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misjudgments
unfair judgments
decision-making process
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repeated interactions
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