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Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #art #children #school #waste #time
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It is considered by some population that
art
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 is an important course to be taught to
students
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 at
school
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, while others think that it is not as important as other subjects
such
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 as science and mathematics are. In my opinion,
art
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 is a mandatory course to be studied at
school
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. On the one hand, some
parents
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 do not support the idea of teaching
art
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 at
school
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 because they see that it is useless for their
children
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, and they argue that the time spent in
art
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 classes every year could be more beneficial if used to teach other important subjects that can help
students
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 in their future.
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, giving more science and math classes which are more difficult for
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 of
students
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 than other subjects are. People who support
this
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 opinion think that
parents
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 who feel that their
children
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 have the talent in any kind of
art
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,
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 can enrol their
children
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 in any after-
school
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art
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 classes.
On the other hand
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, other
parents
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, including myself believe that
art
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 was considered a hobby in old days but now they believe it is a mandatory course and important for all
students
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 to learn because
art
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 reflects the culture of the community and the country.
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, it helps teachers explore the talents of
younger
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the younger
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 generation and find if they have any interest in
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 so that they work on improving their talents and skills.
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 to that,
students
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 can use their talent in
art
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 to do business during or after graduation from
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.
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,
students
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 who have painting talents can paint and sell their paintings, and poet writers can sell their poets. In conclusion,
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 views differ concerning teaching
art
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 at
school
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, I would argue that it is mandatory because it reflects the culture of the nation and helps
parents
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 discover the talent of their
children
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 at early stages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-expression
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving
  • cultural awareness
  • tolerant society
  • STEM subjects
  • employability
  • rigorous subjects
  • curriculum
  • school budgets
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