🔶In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. 🔸What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
In some cultures ,it is taught
children
that the more they try hard , the more they can be successful in reach their targets and everything that they want . In the following essay , the positive point and drawback of this
idea will be discussed .
The advantage of nurture children
to try more and more for their gold would be a positive influence on children
feelings and appearing a satisfaction of life
that makes them full of life
and energy.Because if children
achieve their targets by hardworking , their motivation for life
will increase and a
satisfaction will appear in their Remove the article
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life
.For instance
, if a son who tries to play a
guitar is successful in playing it and music , he will be full of Change the article
the
life
and determination in his life
. Therefore
, teaching children
to be hard work to earn their favourite has a positive influence on their life
.
Creating depression in children
can be the disadvantage of children
are lessened if they try hard, everything will be in their hands . Furthermore
, it is the nature of human life
that they can not achieve everything in the world even by abundant struggling . toddler
should be learned the broken is a part of Add an article
a toddler
the toddler
life
.Therefore
, if people try more to their favourites while they can not be successful it will hurt their emotions and they are depressed. For example
, trying more to rich target is taught to a girl who is a disabled person and can not pain.So she paints and can not be good at it that hurts her feelings.
In conclusion , creating satisfaction of situation is the advantage of telling children
if they try more , they will be able to earn everything . In contrast
, there is a negative point such
as depression because of the broken in this
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