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🔶In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. 🔸What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some cultures ,it is taught
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 that the more they try hard , the more they can be successful in reach their targets and everything that they want . In the following essay , the positive point and drawback of
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 to try more and more for their gold would be a positive influence on
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 feelings and appearing a satisfaction of
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 that makes them full of
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 and energy.Because if
children
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 achieve their targets by hardworking , their motivation for
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 will increase and
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satisfaction will appear in their
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 , if a son who tries to play
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 guitar is successful in playing it and music , he will be full of
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 and determination in his
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, teaching
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 to be hard work to earn their favourite has a positive influence on their
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 . Creating depression in
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 can be the disadvantage of
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 are lessened if they try hard, everything will be in their hands .
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 , it is the nature of human
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 that they can not achieve everything in the world even by abundant struggling .
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 should be learned the broken is a part of
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 , if people try more to their favourites while they can not be successful it will hurt their emotions and they are depressed.
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 , trying more to rich target is taught to a girl who is a disabled person and can not pain.So she paints and can not be good at it that hurts her feelings. In conclusion , creating satisfaction of situation is the advantage of telling
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 if they try more , they will be able to earn everything .
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 , there is a negative point
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 as depression because of the broken in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • perseverance
  • self-esteem
  • confidence
  • obstacles
  • ambitious goals
  • growth mindset
  • unrealistic expectations
  • disappointment
  • stress
  • burnout
  • external factors
  • socio-economic status
  • resources
  • opportunities
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