Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted to do. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Laws

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and

regulations

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make human

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more systematic in terms of

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in society, crimes, as well as justice. All the communities depend on

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along with

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, It would not work out if

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have the liberty to do whatever they have the desire to do. I completely agree with the writer’s notion, and the reasons for my inclination are articulated in the

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paragraphs. On the one hand, many

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argue about if

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have the choice to do freely whatever they like without

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and

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life

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would be more peaceful.

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, it is not deniable that fact that, without any restriction’s individuals enjoy their

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and freedom.

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, it could be possible it may have few drawbacks

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as society would be disturbed in the terms of there are no

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and

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, if there

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no law

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various crimes might escalate

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as threats, murder, robbery, thief you name it yet, to solve these or get justice for uncommitted crimes

people

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need

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and some

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to fine criminals. Another supportive argument is that traffic signals, because of these

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people

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could able to travel freely without disturbance.

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, what would happen if the traffic signals went off because of some reason, each and individual had faced

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problem and everyone knows the situation that masses stuck in traffic jab problems.

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, education

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and

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because of that masses had built a habit of discipline for themselves and they follow the

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, imagine if there are no

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in the schools or universities

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there are chances that students would spend more time outside with hanging out with friends rather than the classrooms.

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, the government acts for factories altogether with sand mining because

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that

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is stable if there is no dominance by the administration

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would face a devastating impact on the environment. To conclude, considering above mentioned points it is evident that,

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masses would be more content without

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it has various downsides as compared with merits. I believe, humans’

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more stable if they follow all the

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and

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is rational.

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