Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal, some.people , however ,think that other tips of progress are equally important for country . Discuss both of the view and give your opinion ?

Many governments believe that solving economic issues in

countries

is the most essential target .

In contrast

, sometimes it is thought by people that the other progress

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necessary as well as economic .In my idea , there is not

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difference between the effectiveness of economic and other goals. In the following essay , both of the views will be discussed . Observing and being many needs on people life and

countries

which can not be solved or improved by economic improvement would be the strong cause of the public seem the equal

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between improvement in economic and other targets .

Furthermore

, some issues in some

countries

have occurred that needs specialised development.

For example

, some political arguments between communities are seen

such

as happening warms between Israel and Palestine that need presidents

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their communication politics .

On the other hand

, the power full reason for knowing financial development as the main gold for the governments would be the fact that many problems in societies have root in

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financial matters and poverty .

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,

government

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a government

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think that the more they improve the economic situation in the

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life , the better

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an

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more tranquillity people will be able to have so a

calmness

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country can be made.

For instance

, if there is not observed economic progress , the public can not provide their needs

such

as feeding , children's school's fees and rent or buy

house

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.

Therefore

, providing a proper condition in

countries

obeys from improvement in financial condition by the government. In conclusion , in my opinion ,

although

, some situation and matters in

countries

would be solved by the perfect economic progress , the

valuable

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of economic and other goals is equally .Because some issue can not be improved by financial solution .