Now days more and more people buy and use their own cars .Do you think the advantage of this trend for individual outweigh its disadvantages for the environment ??

Recently , purchasing own
cars
has increased in countries and abundant
people
tend to have their privet
cars
. In my view , the demerits of
this
idea are more than
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merit. In the following essay , the negative and positive points will be discussed . The powerful drawback of buying individual vehicles would be the fact that greenhouse gasses are created by carbon dioxide manufactured by automobiles .
Also
, global warming
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occurred because of greenhouse gasses generation that melts ices from
surface
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the surface

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of rivers and ocean .
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, many
of
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disasters can happen.
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,
Philippine
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the Philippine

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tsunami
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had considerable environmental damages
such
as
extinction
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of some species in the ocean .
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, if the publics buy
car
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, they will have a motivation to use it rather than the public transportation that it would be harmless for the environment because of machines ' bad fuel produced and it makes the global warming .
On the other hand
, the main advantage of taking the
car
owned
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is the more
people
use individual devices , the less spacious are destroyed in the natural environment. Apparently , when
people
do not have a
car
, they have to take
the
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publics
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vehicles . So , it needs enough space .
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, manufacturing
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railways

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rail ways
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railways

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in
subway
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the subway

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needs more spaces than
cars
.
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, development in
the
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public transportation can not be possible unless some natural environments are used and destroyed for the target . In conclusion , in my view , despite the fact that some regions are omitted for planning new public devices because of increasing
car
purchased ,it is harmless for the environment . Because
,
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the more
people
drive
cars
, the more global warming as environmental issues will appear.

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