Some people say that advertising has positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because it will make people feel dissatisfied with who they are and what they have. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
For some
people
, advertising is considered successful in increasing the economy
. However
, others believe that nowadays the advertisements have become source
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a source
the source
people
's dissatisfaction with themselves. In my opinion, the achievement of an advertisement is not only from an attractive form but also
from content that has a good message and does not vilify someone's shortcomings.
Advertising has several positive effects in
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on
economy
. One of the most important is that advertising is getting quite a lot of jobs nowadays. Influencers, celebgrams, and youtubers
are some examples of professions that have grown because of the expansion of advertising. Correct your spelling
YouTubers
In addition
, advertising is part of the buying and selling activities that occur in the community. Good sales are often backed up by good advertising too. Another positive influence is that advertising brings in large taxes for the region so that it moves the economy
of the community and also
the state.
However
, it turns out that some people
feel that advertising harms a person's self-confidence. Advertising is considered as determining people
's behavior
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behaviour
such
as presenting a more comfortable feeling for someone when using a particular product
. In addition
, a higher sense of prestige towards the use of certain products is also
often influenced by advertising. One can feel cooler if they use product
brands advertised by top celebrities, compared to ads that are shown without involving idols. In using the product
, the psychological aspect of the consumer is involved, so that the product
is no longer an intrinsic material value but is full of complex psychological images.
To sum up, I believe that advertising plays an important role in developing the economy
, both individually and in a country. However
, a good advertisement must have a moral message that has a positive impact on society, such
as inviting people
to be grateful for the situation and lead them to goodness, not just attracting them to a consumptive life.Submitted by lapakrahankaskus on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
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- even though
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