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some people think that social networking apps are beneficial for society, other people think that it has a bad impact on society. discuss both views and give your opinion

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It's true that many social networking
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 as Facebook, WhatsApp, Instagram and Twitter have a significant role to create and spread fake
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 in
society
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 while other
people
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 think social networking
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 are beneficial to raise social and common issues to draw the attention of government and
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, other claims that it exaggerates the situation and lead to the debate ,not to the solutions. In
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essay I give both points of view before the final verdict. On the
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 hand, Social networking apps are beneficial for
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society
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 in numerous ways.
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, It helps the
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 to connect with each other , even though they do not belong to
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 place or country.
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, it helps to build a strong relationship among peoples as well as give an opportunity to talk and share their personal life with their loved
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,It provides a platform to spoke their opinions,raise an issue and educate others .
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 create environmental awareness through Facebook and Instagram and During the covid ,19 the
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 raise the issue of lack of oxygen in their respective states.
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, Overdepended and Believed all the social networking post has a significant chance increase the fake
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 which has a bad impact on
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. As well as overusing social
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 networking
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 on the phone and computers lead to a sedentary and unproductive lifestyle. The major drawback of social networking
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 is creating and spreading the fake
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 in
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 which cause chaos but sometimes even the worse create strike and riots.
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, In 2018 the fake
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 spread all over the internet-famous actress Alia Bhatt was a dumb girl, she had not known about the Nation for
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 she had faced a lot of mental pressure and physical trouble. Obviously,
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news
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 was spread by the haters.
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 is a clear example of how the fake
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 escalation by social
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 affect an individual life and
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,In my ,opinion using social
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 with responsibility and caution brings a positive great change in public and
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 help the underprivileged
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 to share their issues, as well as they, got an opportunity to learn. Before posting anything on social
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sites
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,we always kept in mind that our
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 post can
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 affect another person life.

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