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some people think that social networking apps are beneficial for society, other people think that it has a bad impact on society. discuss both views and give your opinion

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It's true that many social networking
sites
such
 as Facebook, WhatsApp, Instagram and Twitter have a significant role to create and spread fake
news
 in
society
 while other
people
 think social networking
sites
 are beneficial to raise social and common issues to draw the attention of government and
people
, other claims that it exaggerates the situation and lead to the debate ,not to the solutions. In
this
 ,
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essay I give both points of view before the final verdict. On the
one
 hand, Social networking apps are beneficial for
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society
 in numerous ways.
Firstly
, It helps the
people
 to connect with each other , even though they do not belong to
one
 place or country.
Also
, it helps to build a strong relationship among peoples as well as give an opportunity to talk and share their personal life with their loved
one
's
Secondly
,It provides a platform to spoke their opinions,raise an issue and educate others .
For example
,
People
 create environmental awareness through Facebook and Instagram and During the covid ,19 the
people
 raise the issue of lack of oxygen in their respective states.
On the other hand
, Overdepended and Believed all the social networking post has a significant chance increase the fake
news
 which has a bad impact on
society
. As well as overusing social
media
 networking
sites
 on the phone and computers lead to a sedentary and unproductive lifestyle. The major drawback of social networking
sites
 is creating and spreading the fake
news
 in
society
 which cause chaos but sometimes even the worse create strike and riots.
For Instance
, In 2018 the fake
news
 spread all over the internet-famous actress Alia Bhatt was a dumb girl, she had not known about the Nation for
this
news
 she had faced a lot of mental pressure and physical trouble. Obviously,
this
news
 was spread by the haters.
This
 is a clear example of how the fake
news
 escalation by social
media
 affect an individual life and
society
Lastly
,In my ,opinion using social
media
 with responsibility and caution brings a positive great change in public and
also
 help the underprivileged
people
 to share their issues, as well as they, got an opportunity to learn. Before posting anything on social
media
sites
,we always kept in mind that our
one
 post can
also
 affect another person life.
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