Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
As
people
start to enjoy a wide range of sports
, there is a lot of concerns regarding the hazards of extreme sports
. Some people
argue that everyone has the right to choose what they want,even though it has drastic dangers. i
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both
arguments and my perspective.
On the one hand, some Change preposition
on both
people
assume that risky sports
should be blocked entirely. To begin
with, the rate of death is significantly high. Even though there are safety guards and equipments
, it is not perfect in preventing all accidents. To take an example, a person was in an accident and died Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
finally
since a parachute failed to open during falling down the ground. That's why it would be hazardous. Furthermore
, some people
just tried to do it .It's simply because they think these activities would be thrilling and entertaining. Therefore
, some people
argue the governments should regulate these tricky sports
.
Nevertheless
, others believe giving freedom in choosing sports
is significantly pivotal. First
of all, people
who are fond of these sports
are adventurous. They really feel excited and are recharge their battery by doing it. So, anyone do not have other people
's right to extort these breathtaking experience. In addition
, most organizations that are responsible for extreme sports
inform and explain enough about risks and participates must write down a paper recognizing that they heard the probability of death. Besides
, the institutes have forbidden some specific people
such
as pregnant, under 10 age, elderly and people
having heart diseases. Consequently
, it could be recognized because it is implementing very well with the appropriate system.
In conclusion, although
folks have to take into account the burden of danger, the unique experience and unforgettable feeling that sports
give couldn't replace anything. That's why,
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individual's
freedom should be respected.Correct article usage
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