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Many students now have the opportunity to study in other countries. Studying abroad may bring some benefits to some students, but it also has a significant number of disadvantages. Discuss both sides of the argument and give your own opinion

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In
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 new era with convenient access to earning knowledge, many young people are given the opportunity to
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 abroad.
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, some think that even though it is good to
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 in other states, the merit might be magnified the demerit of
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 abroad. I will discuss both points of view in the below paragraphs. On one hand, students will get valuable benefits,
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 as learning a new
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 and getting a wide range of networking.
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, to get to know one's
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 cannot be only accessed from the Internet. We need to experience the
culture
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 for real and apply in our daily life.
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, I believe that get engaged with a new
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 can give new perspectives that encourage us to think critically and to accept new ideas.
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, living abroad means you will meet many people from other regions and races. The new friends will be beneficial as they can be assets in your
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 phase after graduate.
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, students who learn in the best campuses will have good networking with some top tier CEOs, which gives them a shortcut in some business negotiation.
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,
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 and live in other countries will cost a big amount of money especially who choose to live in a country with expensive living cost.
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, scholars from Indonesia will experience some setbacks living in European countries,
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 as the UK, Germany, and France as the living cost is high.
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, stay apart from the family will be difficult. In order to save money, people are not easily flying to a home country to ease their homesick. Sometimes, they only come back to their hometown once a year or wait a good moment. To conclude, it could be a lifetime experience if the students are given the opportunity to have a new life as international graduates.
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, they need to be enough prepared financially and aware that homesick can
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 be an obstacle living in foreign countries.

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