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People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier?

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People
 usually find it difficult to accustom to new circumstances throughout their own lives.
This
 essay will discuss the reason for
this
 statement and give suggestions to make it simpler. In my view the principal reason
of
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people
 are unable to adapt to a new situation is alteration is not pleased by the majority of
people
.
Therefore
, they encounter difficulties when they have to change something.
This
 situation leads to
lack
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 of self-confidence in
people
’s character.
Changing
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 is unavoidable in
people
’s life. If
people
 did not find out how to cope with difficulties which are brought by the alteration, they would never continue to live their own life.
For instance
, a student who went to a foreign country must adapt to the taste of
this
 foreign country’s cuisine. If he hated the taste of foods, his life would be unprecedented hard. Like everything, a range of solutions can be created to solve
this
 problem. One of these ways outs is acknowledging the current situation is caused
from
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 destiny itself. It is the easiest but
also
 the
first
 and foremost way in order to solve
this
 problem.
For example
, let us think about the coronavirus
that is
 the biggest problem in the 21st century. Scientists over the World tried many methods to produce a vaccine and most of them were traditional methods.
However
, scientists who think
to
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keeping
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 up with chancing was essential tried the
MRNA
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mRNA
 method which is
new
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 brand. It is clear that, if these
scienctists
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scientists
 had not acknowledged the alteration, the Pfizer and Moderna vaccines would not have been discovered. In conclusion,
people
 cannot run away from
chancing
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.
Therefore
, everyone must acknowledge that chancing and
adaption
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adaptation
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 are essential.
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