Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

How to reduce

crime

rates in society either sentencing a prolonged jail term or adopting other methods is divided people into two;

however

, I personally consider which methods to be adopted is exclusively determined by the gravity and background of the

crime

.

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but my view followed by

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too. On the one side, those supporting

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culprits argue that

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would create a feeling of fear among wrongdoers.

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, when sentencing

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life

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term, they could, hardly, released back to society in their

life

.

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, many convicts, who

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living

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now, have advised potential culprits unless they have committing mistakes, they will not end up

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having a terrible

life

term.

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,

although

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to death seems to be an extra burden to

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,

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can usually peace in cities.

On the other hand

, opponents advocate that introducing parallel initiatives would be much better. Being introduced

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service

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could encourage a rethinking regarding the

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they have committed: the authority may benefit from the unpaid work because these workers need to be paid as

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is a punishment. In Kerala, to illustrate

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, there are some young boys who violated traffic rule was served in a community welfare

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,

instead

of prosecuting.

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perspective

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, I think that minor crimes can be punished by offering volunteer services, but categories,

such

as terrorists, murders, espionage must be given corporal punishment, so the government may require a small fund to handle

this

than

life

imprisonments. In conclusion,

this

essay discussed which method of penalty can limit the number of criminals. One group support

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long custody, and others prefer

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, but I firmly think it should be based

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type

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of

crime

and

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history. It is vital that the government should make an appropriate decision on

this

matter.