Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

How to reduce crime rates in society either sentencing a prolonged jail term or adopting other methods is divided people into two;

however

, I personally consider which methods to be adopted is exclusively determined by the gravity and background of the crime.

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essay shall explain not only two sides of

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but my view followed by

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too. On the one side, those supporting penalising culprits argue that

this

would create a feeling of fear among wrongdoers.

In other words

, when sentencing to a

life

term, they , hardly, to be released back to society in their

life

.

For instance

, many convicts, who are living

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now, have advised potential culprits unless they have committing mistakes, they will not end up

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having a terrible

life

term.

Conversely

,

although

sentenced to death seems to be an extra

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burden

to taxpayers,

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can usually peace in cities.

On the other hand

, opponents advocate that introducing parallel initiatives would be much better. Being introduced

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community service

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could encourage a rethinking regarding the offence they have committed: the authority may benefit from the

upaid

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unpaid

work because these workers need not

to

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be paid as

this

is a punishment. In Kerala, to illustrate

this

, there are some young boys who

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violated

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rule was served in a community

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welfare

centre,

instead

of

prosecuting

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.

Thus

, it is evident that the method was proven to be successful. By looking

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, I think that minor crimes can be punished by offering volunteer services, but categories,

such

as terrorists, murders,

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espionage

must be given corporal punishment, so the government may require a small fund to handle

this

than

life

imprisonments. In conclusion,

this

essay discussed which method of penalty can limit the number of

crimals

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criminals

. One group supports long custody, and others prefer another method, but I firmly think it should be based

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type

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of crimes and criminal history. It is vital that the government should make an

approriate

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appropriate

decision on

this

matter.