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Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. Hovever, at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous . What do you extend do you agree with this statement?

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As the world consists of various kind of lives and one of them is human.They can harm and face different health problems which can cause detrimental effects. Due to the fact that to be away from health problems
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 need to be treated. From the ancient period the medical history experience variations in treatment methods. Some
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 consider that methods that are undetermined by specialists can be risky
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 their life. I strongly believe that these ways might harm
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`s health. As some
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 do not rely on doctors they might be persuaded by others easily. They want to hope for the best results.
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, a few decades ago there was a meeting about gifted
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 who treated the vast majority of
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 by their energy,thereby some
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 intended to participate in
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 ceremony and take advantage.
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 method was revealed and it is clear that it happened only because the naive
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 might trust in him.
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 that these pains were disappeared temporarily.
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 person caused some of them to die.
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, the options which are unfamiliar with medicine might bring merits for some
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.
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,elder
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 who experience rural life used to the fresh air and organic foods.
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,when they are ill, they try to solve their problems with herbal medicines. It can be much more effective rather than any medicine consisting of many chemicals.
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 gives us the result to decide that if they are used in an appropriate way,in a right limit time,they will not affect badly. In conclusion,
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 utilize and take benefits from the natural way,it is better to apply specialists who know deeply. Taking into consideration the upper-mentioned, they have to be careful with other methods of medicine.
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