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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading use to buy things. Others think that it is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,
people
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use
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 different sources for knowing information and knowledge across the globe.
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, many
companies
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 take advantage of these sources and put an
advertisement
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 for their
product
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 between them. Some individual opines that the
advertisement
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 is
one
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 of the finest methods to sell things.
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, others believe that today no
one
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 cares about
advertisement
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 anymore.
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 assignment indeed to describes both perspectives and I shall analyze my viewpoint too. On the
one
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 hand,
people
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 feel that advertising has the strength to reach their
product
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 to the public.
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, every morning most
people
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 have a habit to read the newspaper. Many
companies
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use
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 newspaper to print their
product
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advertisement
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 on it.
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, television is a good source of entertainment as well as advertising. Many celebrities do
advertisement
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 for the company and
people
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 admire their favourite actors and sportsperson.
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, at present, social media applications
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 as Facebook, Instagram and many others are available on the internet. Sellers subscribe their
product
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 on that applications.
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, in a recent report in India, today 90% of
companies
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 put their
product
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 details on social media and
people
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 respond to their ads. The sale of these products increased after made ads on a social platform.
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, many
people
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 feel that no
one
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 cares about
advertisement
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. The predominant reason is that
people
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 are more active about their needs. Sometimes what
companies
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 show in the
advertisement
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 is totally opposite in reality. Due to
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 awareness,
people
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use
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 Google and research on the internet and get proper knowledge about the
product
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.
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, on google every
product
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 data available . Many
people
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 compare their
product
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 with other
companies
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 and read the reviews given by different customers
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 buy it if
they
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 completely satisfied with the things. In conclusion, I believe that today many
people
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use
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 the internet for proper research of purchasing
product
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. There are many
companies
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 established, some are good quality products and others are opposed to it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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