You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you have bought the clothing from. In your letter: Give details of the purchase Describe the problem Explain why you need a replacement urgently

Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the recent purchase of a piece of clothing from your online store. I have been a loyal customer of your shop for a long time. I have ordered a shirt from your website, which I am going to wear to my brother's birthday party next Wednesday. It arrived yesterday at my home. Unfortunately, its colour does not match what is shown in the pictures. It is an extremely faded colour. I have checked again on the webpage, and it is showing a dark blue colour.

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, its material

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does not look like cotton, which is described there. I tried to wear it, and it does not suit me well. I have bought many school and traditional attire from your shop, but

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is the first time I do not feel happy with the service. I do not have enough time to select another suit, so I would like to request that you replace the current shirt with the original one, which is mentioned on the order. I have enclosed the receipt

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my letter. Please let me know how I can return

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shirt, and about the courier service. I will look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Gaurav.

gaurav5251028

Oct 15, 2025

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structure

Put one idea in each paragraph. First say what you bought, then what is wrong, then ask for the replacement. Do not mix ideas.

language

Use clear and short sentences. Use only simple words.

content

Be brief about the problem and say what you want and by when so help can come fast.

tone

Polite tone and clear purpose.

content

Gives purchase details and order info.

action

States the replacement as the action needed.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

214 words

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