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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world

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Today global trade around the world can affect increment in an integration of the
countries
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. In my view,
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 is positive progress which can cause to improve the social and economical condition of the citizens. One of the main profits is that several
countries
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 in different parts of the world are able to close each other
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 they try to purchase the same goods.
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, South Korea and Japan may develop relationships by producing similar products.In turn,
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 could bring reasonable solutions to complicated conflicts in these
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. Another positive side of the integration is that it may destroy durable distinctions involved in two
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 citizens. By
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 I mean, in most cases, tourists are able to face some difficulties related to eating habitats, living condition when they aimed to visit other places. The desire to restrict differences in several
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 might overcome these social and cultural problems.
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, there is a significant change in the overall performance of people who live in becoming similar places.
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, resulting from globalization people have to turn their daily life into
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higher degree of development.
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,
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 progress occurred with the
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 during the
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 ten years. In conclusion, I strongly support that integration around the world can lead to actual improvement on the social condition of individuals and many
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 solve their complex conflicts.
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