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We are wired at all times. Smart phones have changed the way we communicate with people in the world. More than its advantages, it is seen as a distraction. How badly is your society influenced and what solutions are there to stay away from this device? Discuss.

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The
last
 hundred years have seen rapid and dramatic developments in many areas, including medicine, transport, manufacturing and communications.Over the period our life has changed in many ways which our parents and grandparents could only have dreamed of,today we have everything within the reach of our hands. Inventions of science are wonderful and useful.Through
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 I will like to bring forth my opinion on the shared subject. It is
the
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 fact that smartphones have changed the way mankind deals with
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people
. With a smartphone a person can make a call , send an email, do a video call, play games, one can send or receive a message in a
second
, a friend and loved one can track with the help of a GPS option. It is the easiest and most comfortable way to communicate with
people
 in any location of the world ,at any time or anywhere. Mobile phones have access to the internet through which we can use social media platforms
such
 as Facebook , Instagram and can google any information.
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, we have an option to access
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Whatsapp media on which we can create a group and can communicate with numbers of
people
 at
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. Because of its numerous
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people
 have changed the way they used to communicate earlier
such
 as meeting in person to share any information or write a letter etcetera.
This
 leads to badly affected our lives in terms of health and our society .It has been observed that
people
 are spending most of their time on phones which is a health hazard.
Moreover
,
people
 have a habit to check their phones every 5 minutes by assuming that they must have received an update. To prevent
this
, we can stop the notification when we are working or with our loved ones or when we are going to sleep.
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 making a call we can try to meet our favourite ounces in a while. To sum up, I would like to say smartphones are a great invention but access to anything is a curse. Using the smartphone when it is needed is always admired ,
otherwise
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 it is a distraction.
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